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It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages

#people #risks #lives #risk
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 agree that It is important for individuals to take
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such
 as in their
activity
 and work. Of course, accepting risk has different variety of sides. it won't be compared with each other at eve level. In my point of view, taking
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 has a few advantages that bring us the
opportunity
. It pays back a lot of chances by accepting it.
For instance
,
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 had some mistakes that
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 was doing when
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 accomplished my goals,
however
; it made me realize how to do it properly.
On the other hand
, It brings some drawbacks which
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 too serious and not understandable.
Although
 we take the possibility done by humans, it is too difficult to handle it. If we don't accept challenges, we can live in our comfort zone without possibility. It brings us sadness and obstacles too. So, women and men have to avoid getting
risks
 in their
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. In conclusion, taking
risks
 is acceptable and called for
human
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 soul. So, we, all humans could take
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 on our
way
of
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the
activity
. Mistakes make us stronger than now we are. A lot of citizens could understand
activity
 cycles by taking
risks
.
Risks
 are
opportunity
,
way
 and luckiness too. In summary, taking
risks
 is acceptable and called for
human
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the human
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 soul. So, we, all humans could take
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
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 on our
way
of
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the
activity
. Mistakes make us stronger than now we are. A lot of citizens could understand
activity
 cycles by taking
risks
.
Risks
 are
opportunity
,
way
 and luckiness too
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