Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages. To what extent do you agree
There are several ways to gather cultures and ages. From my point of view, I totally agree with
people
who are completely different in religious
, nationality or region. Replace the word
religion
Music
is a good choice to glue people
together even though they have differences
Replace the word
different
Change preposition
in
this
statement.
Music
is an index that can represent how the uniqueness of the culture. For example
, in the football world cup that was held in Brazil, many people
in other countries were surprised with
the opening ceremony's Change preposition
by
song
that was sung by Brazilian and the Brazilian traditional musical instruments that were used in this
song
. Because many people
have not heard the rhythm like this
before. Consequently
, it was popular and spread around the whole world. Moreover
, from the research, human
does more likely to memorize vocabulary from Add an article
the human
a human
music
more
than Correct quantifier usage
apply
Change preposition
from another
another
media platforms. Correct quantifier usage
other
Thus
, music
can use as a learning aid. For instance
, foreigners who want to learn other language
should begin Change the wording
another language
other languages
with
listening to Change preposition
by
music
.
In addition
, music
is not limited by age. There are still a bunch of teenagers who prefer 90's
or country Correct article usage
the 90's
music
genre as well as
remaking an old song
to a new version. Furthermore
, many songs are made to connect a relationship between each other such
as festive song
like Christmas or new year songs that every family member whether older or younger have to Change the noun form
songs
singalong
together.
Correct your spelling
sing along
To conclude
, music
is not only a good tool to create a relationship from internal or external culture but also
brings people
in
every Change preposition
of
ages
together.Change to a singular noun
age
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