Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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years, whilst opponents hold the view that sharing industrial and
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knowledge should be
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among countries, proponents have another perspective. I am of the belief that allowing scientific inquiry and artificial development to all
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world will be better for living
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in healthcare and
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of living. In
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, if it has been prevented or reduced to share with others,
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awareness
will be reduced in many
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and respectively deleterious impacts will be happened
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on developed status.
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all lands unite to fight
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evolution and scientific investigation not only reserve countries, but
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place to live in.
On the other hand
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of information must be in financial fees.To illustrate, there are some findings or cutting edge technology that
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crucial and cost authorities financially and
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online
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payment before
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it.
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it preserve royalty rights,but it
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hands or understood as inaccuracy way. In conclusion,
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that research and developments should be accessible
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anyone and I agree with
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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