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In some countries young people are encouraged to travel or work for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .

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In recent decades, some nations encourage high
school
graduates
 to
travel
 or
work
 before they enrol in post-secondary schools. In my opinion,
although
 it would be beneficial for them to obtain direct
experiences
 through
travel
 or
work
 there are some drawbacks to these
experiences
. First of all, if high
school
graduates
 are allowed to
travel
 around the world prior to university study, it cannot be denied that it enables them to have a wider vision
as well as
 inspiration to the world. The
experiences
 of going overseas, communicating with other races, and looking at historical monuments of other countries provide the students with higher levels of knowledge which is difficult to acquire within the fundamental subjects.
However
, as they spend another year travelling around after high
school
 graduation, they could feel getting behind in terms of ordinary university curriculums.
Secondly
, some federations require high
school
graduates
 to engage in actual
work
experiences
 since it is significantly important for them to recognize whether the students are interested in the sector or not through direct participation.
On the contrary
, if it is different from what they thought about the industry, the longer time than they expected would be required to find another field suitable for them. Another disadvantage of
this
 is as they participate in actual
work
 with basic knowledge of the field from high
school
 education, it is comparatively burdensome to adapt to
work
 for
graduates
. In conclusion, Students who are having difficulty making a decision to
travel
 or
work
 during the term should consider carefully depending on these drawbacks and benefits.
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