The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, in 2011 new store openings
were higher than shop closing until 2018 when closures have risen respectively.
In 2011, market openings
were 8500 until 2012 when these numbers have fallen to under 4000, but that increased in 2014 when market openings
rose below 6000 and almost were equal to closures. However
, at the begging of 2018 openings
decreased to 3000.
Also
, from 2011 to 2014 closings increased from 6400 to 7100 and in 2015 , closures have increased to 700 but at the begging of 2018 that was risen to below 5000.Submitted by sherzod5574485 on
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