Some people think that having people from different nationalities and culture background to a country get a faster development. To what extend do you agree??

Globalization has benefitted the world
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various domains and opened up the doors for the nationals to learn and implement new advancements and techniques from immigrants. Analysing the benefits of having
multi national
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multi-national
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work force
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in businesses of a
country
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come across an idea which fully supports the argument of having international specialists for enormous development. Undoubtedly, a
country
which is having
an immigrants
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immigrants
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specialized
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on
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different trades can make a
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impact
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the
advacnement
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advancement
of that
country
.
For instance
, countries like Malaysia and UAE where people with particular
skills
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sets are providing their services and contributing
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the
developement
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development
of that
country
.
In addition
, developed countries heavily
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on
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technologies and
providing
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specialised
tranining
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training
in fields which are widely in demand
such
as
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Computer technology, Engineering, Architectural development, and
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music and arts to boost
country's
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the country's
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export and generate
reveneue
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revenue
in
terms
of remittances.
On the contrary
, if a nation isolates
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itself
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and
avoid
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the
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interaction
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the world in
terms
of science, technology, arts and culture it will be having a
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dent
upon
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the future of that
country
and will be having severe
impedements
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impediments
impediment
in
terms
of
nation's
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advancements.
For example
, countries like Afghanistan and North
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are heavily impacted in
terms
of advancement in technology
due to
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policies
thus
bearing the fruits of it. Now to mitigate
this
perception they will have to take
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measures to get support from
international
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community. In conclusion, Hiring immigrants to do specialised work will produce a
far reaching
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impact in
terms
of
country's
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the country's
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developemnt
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development
as compared to do investments in acquiring specialised knowledge and skills.
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