Some people think that having people from different nationalities and culture background to a country get a faster development. To what extend do you agree??
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workforce
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come across an idea which fully supports the argument of having international specialists for enormous development.
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immigrants
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far-reaching
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advancement
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developement
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development
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, developed countries heavily invests
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invest
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training
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country's
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the country's
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revenue
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country
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impediments
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of nation's
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the nation's
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Korea
terms
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perception they will have to take confidence building
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far-reaching
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the country's
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development
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