Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to make people feel safer?

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Nowadays, the majority of
people
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can be
worry
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all the time
with
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about
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their safety neither at their own place nor outside. The growth of
criminality
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the criminality
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rate and natural
disaster
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disasters
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are the two main
reason
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reasons
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for
this
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situation
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.
Firstly
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, the news on television and
newspaper
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in newspaper
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are always talking about how cruel
people
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can be to others
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as
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robbery,
rape
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and rape
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. and homicide. The person who did it
not
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is not
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only some strangers but
also
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could be related families or friends.
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, in
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public transportation like
bus
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buses
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or
train
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trains
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, it is often
people
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lost their
wallet
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wallets
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or phone and they did not notice how it can
happened
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happen
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.
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, in some
case
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cases
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, children can murder their parents because they did not
allowed
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allow
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him/her to buy things that he/she asks
.
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for.
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, to solve that, the
goverment
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government
should provide
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access
for
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to
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work and low-cost or free education to the community. The lack of activity and money are the reasons why
people
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choose to do
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bad things to other
people
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.
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, some natural
disaster
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disasters
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occur in many
nation
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nations
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such
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as
tsunami
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tsunamis
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,
earthquake
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earthquakes
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,
flood
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floods
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, and volcanic
eruption
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eruptions
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.
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, a few weeks ago, Turkey and
Syiria
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Syria
had earthquake disasters and
it
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they
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happened at night time when
mostly
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most
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people
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are
sleep
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sleeping
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. The impact are many buildings destroyed and it
cause
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causes
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thousand
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people
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of people
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died
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to die
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and
injured
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be injured
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badly.
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, to control the
situation
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government and society need to prevent the
situation
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with
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by
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controlling
the
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land use,
such
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as
people
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forbid to live in
the
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risk area of
tsunami
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a tsunami
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or volcanic mountain,
then
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government
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the government
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need to control the standard of building construction so when the disaster
happen
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happens
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, people,
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people
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are still feel
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still feel
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safe at home. In conclusion, the unlucky
situation
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could
be happen
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happen
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anytime and anywhere but with
the
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apply
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preventing
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preventive
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action and monitoring regularly from the country and the
people
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, we still can reduce the
affect
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effect
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.
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