Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to make people feel safer?
Nowadays, the majority of
people
can be Use synonyms
worry
all the time Wrong verb form
worried
with
their safety neither at their own place nor outside. The growth of Change preposition
about
criminality
rate and natural Correct article usage
the criminality
disaster
are the two main Fix the agreement mistake
disasters
reason
for Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
this
Linking Words
situation
.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, the news on television and Linking Words
newspaper
are always talking about how cruel Change preposition
in newspaper
people
can be to others Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
the
robbery, Correct article usage
apply
rape
. and homicide. The person who did it Correct word choice
and rape
not
only some strangers but Add a missing verb
is not
also
could be related families or friends. Linking Words
For example
, in Linking Words
the
public transportation like Correct article usage
apply
bus
or Fix the agreement mistake
buses
train
, it is often Fix the agreement mistake
trains
people
lost their Use synonyms
wallet
or phone and they did not notice how it can Fix the agreement mistake
wallets
happened
. Change the verb form
happen
In addition
, in some Linking Words
case
, children can murder their parents because they did not Fix the agreement mistake
cases
allowed
him/her to buy things that he/she asksChange the verb form
allow
.
Change preposition
for.
Thus
, to solve that, the Linking Words
goverment
should provide Correct your spelling
government
the
access Correct article usage
apply
for
work and low-cost or free education to the community. The lack of activity and money are the reasons why Change preposition
to
people
choose to do Use synonyms
the
bad things to other Correct article usage
apply
people
.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, some natural Linking Words
disaster
occur in many Fix the agreement mistake
disasters
nation
Change to a plural noun
nations
such
as Linking Words
tsunami
, Fix the agreement mistake
tsunamis
earthquake
, Fix the agreement mistake
earthquakes
flood
, and volcanic Fix the agreement mistake
floods
eruption
. Fix the agreement mistake
eruptions
For instance
, a few weeks ago, Turkey and Linking Words
Syiria
had earthquake disasters and Correct your spelling
Syria
it
happened at night time when Correct pronoun usage
they
mostly
Correct your spelling
most
people
are Use synonyms
sleep
. The impact are many buildings destroyed and it Wrong verb form
sleeping
cause
thousand Change the verb form
causes
Use synonyms
people
Change preposition
of people
died
and Change the verb form
to die
injured
badly. Add a missing verb
be injured
Furthermore
, to control the Linking Words
situation
government and society need to prevent the Use synonyms
situation
Use synonyms
with
controlling Change preposition
by
the
land use, Correct article usage
apply
such
as Linking Words
people
forbid to live in Use synonyms
the
risk area of Correct article usage
apply
tsunami
or volcanic mountain, Add an article
a tsunami
the tsunami
then
Linking Words
government
need to control the standard of building construction so when the disaster Add an article
the government
happen
Change the verb form
happens
Add the comma(s)
, people,
people
Use synonyms
are still feel
safe at home.
In conclusion, the unlucky Change the verb form
still feel
situation
could Use synonyms
be happen
anytime and anywhere but with Change the verb form
happen
the
Correct article usage
apply
preventing
action and monitoring regularly from the country and the Replace the word
preventive
people
, we still can reduce the Use synonyms
affect
.Replace the word
effect
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