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Internet development has a great impact on people's life. Some people say social media do more harm to the youth. Other people say they do the great to youth. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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it is common knowledge that social
media
 has changed our lives. Some
people
 reckon that social
media
 has many disadvantages,
whereas
 others suppose that even though it has some disadvantages there are more advantages. In
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 I will argue both views and after ,that I will inform my personal opinion. on the one ,hand social
media
 is harmful to
people
, for ,instance we can see that nowadays many
people
 have a problem with communication, they prefer using the
internet
 than communicate with friends or other
people
, in ,addition we can see many
people
 who have problems with eyes, and the majority of that cases happened
due to
 the
internet
. ,
Moreover
 social
media
 can lead
people
 to obesity, for ,example
people
 do not spend their time efficiently, they
also
 spend their time on social
media
 and
they
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do not train,
therefore
 they get overweight and can have many health problems because of it. on the other ,hand
internet
 development has an enormous impact on
people
's life. For ,instance if we long to know something we can browse the
internet
 and we will know anything that we desire to know,
due to
 social
media
 we can meet new
people
 around the world,
we
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 can learn a new language online,
additionally
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 there are many
people
 who live in other countries and friends of them or family members can call them to communicate with them and see each other's face anytime and everywhere in conclusion, even though it has many disadvantages as far as I am able to judge social
media
 has indeed many advantages, and if we use it righteously, no one will suffer.
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