The bar chart shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007
The bar chart illustrates the time which teens spend on different
activities
from 2002 to 2007 in Chester.
Overall
,it can be seen that the significant leader in all years
was watching TV,while
bowling is an outsider.Other activities
are almost similar to each other,except for watching DVDs.
It is clear that
different activities
are the most popular in different years
.Going out seems equal almost apply every year,however
, in 2007 it was more popular than others almost apply twice.Watching TV was a significant leader.In all years
it started at least from 25,while
other activities
were mainly about 10.As previously,in 2007 watching TV was higher than in other charts.the other five activities
are almost identical,however
, two of them differ.Watching DVDs was in applying second place.In 2002 and 2007 it was 10,while
in other years
it was about 15.The total outsider is applied to Bowling,which in 2002 hardly rose to about 4.In other years
it was about 3,however
, in 2007 it was barely 1 .Submitted by andriykolomiyets12 on
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