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some teachers says international student exchange program would be beneficial for all teenage school students. do you think its adVAntage will outweigh the disadvantage.

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A number of tutors have the idea that if the pupils exchange between some countries there are several merits for all adolescent school
students
. in
this
 essay, we want to discuss the positive and negative points of
this
 view. on the one hand, many commentators justifiably
argues
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 that there are some advantages to exchange
students
. from
this
 point of view, they believe that
this
 will happen
excellent
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 experience for all
students
.
on
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the
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other
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 each international pupils have a specific experience from their region and they can share it with other
students
.
for example
, a student from china is able to explain to other
students
 their culture or the amazing place in their country if he studies in the US.
however
, I don't find
this
 argument valid because all
students
 find it easy
through
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 explore
from
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the web.
on the other hand
, there are those who subscribe to the view that the exchange international
students
 are not beneficial to all
students
.
firstly
,
,
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usually international
students
 immigrate without family, so there is a threat to them. from an educational viewpoint, there are several psychological problems for
students
 who are far away from their families.
such
 as
,
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 the amount of stress rising significantly among them.
moreover
, they are able to bring several ugly cultures into
a new countries
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so that
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,
I
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strongly disagree its positive aspects are noticeable. in conclusion,
although
 there are some merits to exchanging international
students
 for all adolescents, the negative
of
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points are far more as far from family and some threats in
new
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region
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.
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