It is impressive for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Currently, most
of
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apply
people
think that it is vital for individuals to take danger of their professional Add an article
the people
lives
and also
private
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their private
lives
. If people
have to establish in
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themselves in
work
or study segment , they have to take some Correct article usage
the work
risks
. It has some demerits but the merits of taking risks
can outweigh the drawbacks.
Most of the renowned public take Add an article
the risk
a risk
risk
to achieve their own name Fix the agreement mistake
risks
such
as by
hard work and by uncertainty. Change preposition
through
To begin
with, scientists can not do anything at once . They are trying at end of gaining success. For example
, Tomas Edison who
tried hard and soul to invent Correct pronoun usage
apply
light
bulb and he have to take some Change the article
the light
risks
to make it as well as
after taking risks
he achieved her goal . Secondly
, the student do
not know about their future. Change the verb form
does
Moreover
, they are continuing their studies to reach their destination. In that destination
they are facing lots of failures moments and danger Add a comma
,destination
also
but never stop to take risks
. For instance
, students who want to be a doctor, they
have to give lots of Correct pronoun usage
apply
exam
which are not easy and they may be failed but get up once again without thinking Change to a plural noun
exams
any
insecurity. At the Change preposition
of any
last
moment that student will get doctor
. Add an article
a doctor
the doctor
However
, we can see that the
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apply
people
take various types of step
in Fix the agreement mistake
steps
personal
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their personal
lives
as well as
occupation
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occupational
lives
.
Whatever, it has some disadvantages too. First of all, people
may face economical
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the economical
an economical
problem
for taking danger in their Fix the agreement mistake
problems
profession
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professional
lives
. For instance
, the
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apply
businessmen
will take Fix the agreement mistake
businessman
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a loan
loan
from Fix the agreement mistake
loans
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a bank
the bank
bank
, Fix the agreement mistake
banks
if
he will face a great loss Correct word choice
and if
then
he
may Correct pronoun usage
they
be get
bankruptcy. Change the verb form
get
Besides
, the person's unsuccess not only give depression that person but also
affect their family members. For example
, the unsuccessful person'
s family have to lead a poor life of uncertain steps. But my point of view is that Correct your spelling
person
,
despite the problem of taking Remove the comma
apply
risks
the individuals may lose but end
of the day they will shine in their private and Add an article
the end
profession
life.
In conclusion,Replace the word
professional
for
taking Change preposition
by
risks
people
might face economical and personal problems but they can try again that work and become Add an article
a success
success
. So I agree with Replace the word
successful
essay
statement. My opinion is that the advantages of taking Correct article usage
the essay
risks
can meet up the disadvantages.Submitted by opshorajhumpa2001 on
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