Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Nowadays, many

people

argue that a person’s

happiness

depends on

some

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various factors, some of them believe that having a huge sum of

money

can give a feeling of great joy.

However

, there are many other

things

such

as

a

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good family

relationships

or self-accomplishment in life which make a person feel happy. The main reason

of

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having

a

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plenty of

money

is that it allows

people

to live in a luxury. In fact,

money

provides to purchase luxuries and experiences that can bring joy and pleasure

such

as travel, expensive

things

and material comfort.

For instance

, buying

an

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apartments

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or expensive

cars

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can make habitants feel cheerful and satisfied because it increases their social status.

Furthermore

, wealth can

also

give

people

ability

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to help others and it brings a positive impact

in

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their community and

sense

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a sense

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of fulfilment for them.

However

, there are many other

things

that can bring

happiness

. One of them is strong

relationships

with family which lead to joy in life. When

people

have great

relationships

with their loved ones and friends, they can share

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their feelings with them.

In addition

,

this

can reduce stress levels, increase

happiness

and give

feel

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the feel

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of care

from

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this

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close

people

.

Moreover

, achieving a goal in life can make

person

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a person

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feel satisfied and feel happy.

For instance

, some studies have shown that good kinship, sense of purpose and accomplishments are key

of

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happiness

.

To conclude

,

money

can definitely lead to

luxury

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a luxury

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lifestyle and

buy

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many

things

which

brings

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happiness

.

However

,

relationships

with family and personal growth can

also

affect to person’s jollity.