You are planning to visit another country. A member of your family lives in that country. Write to them and ask for some information. in your letter, -Identify when you last saw them -Explain where you plan to go and ask if they have any suggestions -Ask if they would like to come with you

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Dear Riddhi, I hope

this

letter finds you well. Its have been a long time since we met, I remember

last

we met at our cousin's marriage three years ago and unfortunately,

due to

hectic

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work schedule, I was not able to write a letter to you. I hope Kishan and Riddhi are

also

doing great. I have great news to share with you that I am

coming

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tocoming

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Canada next month for my

further

studies. Since you have been living there for a long time, do you have any suggestions for me ? especially, regarding the documents to carry. I know, you are living in Calgary which is far from Alberta.

However

, it would be great if you are free next month and could come with me to Alberta. I will feel a lot more secure if you come with me. Please let me know if you could make it. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, Kishan

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7 paragraphs

160 words

8.00

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Clear and correct grammar

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