Question: in the future, no body will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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in
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modern era, the
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people
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get
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is changing. some
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argue that it will cause a lack number of
people
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will read printed
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or newspapers because they will get the online version on the internet freely. From my perspective, I disagree that all
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will totally move from paper-based
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to online
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.
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is because not all
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can change their
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of reading in the future and for the old generation, it is hard to adapt to technology fastly.
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, there is no guarantee that all ebooks are free to download.
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, some
people
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prefer to get
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from printed
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rather than using online sources.
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, some
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argue that it is easy to get
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from
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with reliable sources rather than surfing the internet to get
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full of unreliable sources. if they want to download materials provided by reliable publishers on the internet they have to pay. Another reason is, by using
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, it is easy to highlight the important idea by underlining or colouring the sentence or paragraph.
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, for some
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, it is hard to remember to memorize what they read on screen than what they read in the book.
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, some older
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cannot change the
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they read fastly. In
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case, if they want to move from
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to e-
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they have to adapt to the technology itself.
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, if they want to download the material online, they have to ask their children or relatives to help them. Other than that, older
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can hardly read on screen because the eyes will easily feel tired because of the radiation generated by computers' screens.
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, the
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people
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read will be affected in
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technological era.
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, I argue that not all
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will affect and tend to read printed
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or magazines because of some reasons that they do not want to deal with.
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