Question: in the future, no body will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

in
this
modern era, the
way
people
get
information
is changing. some
people
argue that it will cause a lack number of
people
will read printed
books
or newspapers because they will get the online version on the internet freely. From my perspective, I disagree that all
readers
will totally move from paper-based
readers
to online
readers
.
This
is because not all
readers
can change their
way
of reading in the future and for the old generation, it is hard to adapt to technology fastly.
Also
, there is no guarantee that all ebooks are free to download.
Firstly
, some
people
prefer to get
information
from printed
books
rather than using online sources.
In addition
, some
people
argue that it is easy to get
information
from
books
with reliable sources rather than surfing the internet to get
information
full of unreliable sources. if they want to download materials provided by reliable publishers on the internet they have to pay. Another reason is, by using
books
, it is easy to highlight the important idea by underlining or colouring the sentence or paragraph.
Moreover
, for some
readers
, it is hard to remember to memorize what they read on screen than what they read in the book.
Secondly
, some older
people
cannot change the
way
they read fastly. In
this
case, if they want to move from
books
to e-
books
they have to adapt to the technology itself.
For instance
, if they want to download the material online, they have to ask their children or relatives to help them. Other than that, older
readers
can hardly read on screen because the eyes will easily feel tired because of the radiation generated by computers' screens.
To conclude
, the
way
people
read will be affected in
this
technological era.
However
, I argue that not all
readers
will affect and tend to read printed
books
or magazines because of some reasons that they do not want to deal with.
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