A company offers a temporary job with no salary, but it helps you to gain some work experience. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, -introduce your previous work experience -tell the manager which department you want to work -describe what expectation you have from the job
Dear Manager,
I am writing
this
letter because I am interested in your company. I am looking for a temporary job with no salary. Because I need a work experience about pilotage.
Actually, I have some experience in the aviation sector. Firstly
, I worked in the airport as a passenger services officer for 7 months and then
, I worked as a cabin crew at Pegasus Airlines for 2 years. So, I am familiar with this
sector. Moreover
, I have a planor and paragliding pilot licence. So, I have flight experience of about 100 hours. However
, my biggest dream is to become a commercial pilot. So, that is
why, I want to work with your airline company.
I have a lot of skills in pilotage. For example
, I can manage stress, I am a team player,and a quick learner and I love aviation. Also
, this
is my dream that came from my childhood. So, I am a volunteer for this
position. Moreover
, I want a lot of responsibility.
I am waiting for your answer. Have a nice day.
Sincerely,
Jenny WhiteSubmitted by ecem.tekben on
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Task Achievement
Consider providing a bit more detail about your expectations from the job, as it was one of the requirements of the task. This could improve your task achievement score.
Coherence & Cohesion
Using a variety of sentence structures and more transition words could increase the flow and coherence of your letter.
Task Achievement
Including a specific section or paragraph about your expectations from the job may make your letter more complete and closely aligned with the task requirements.
Task Achievement
You effectively introduced your previous work experience, which answered one part of the task requirements.
Coherence & Cohesion
The logical structure of your letter is clear, with an introduction, body paragraphs detailing your experience and request, and a conclusion.
Coherence & Cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriately formal, which suits the tone of a letter to a manager.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite