The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

The assigned line chart illustrates the information about the sale of five different kinds of

jam

such

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as

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Strawberry , Raspberry , Grape, Cherry and Plum between 2009 and 2014.

Overall

, it is lucid that, the different kinds of

jam

in strawberry, raspberry and grape

shows

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an upward trend.

However

, the downward trend

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was followed by cherry and plum. At a fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that

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the sale of

jam

in plum in

21st

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century was around 2.5%.

while

it rapidly declined was 0% in 2014.

Moreover

, the cherry

jam

between 2009 and 2012

was fluctuated

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with

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3%

then

it slightly declined

about

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2.8% in the later year. After that, the grape was approximately 0.5% in 2009 and

then

climbed continuously in the given period of time.

Further

scrutinizing the chart, the strawberry was higher than 3% in 21 century ,

then

it

was remained

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the same

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3.5% in 2010. After that, it peaked at 7% in 2014.

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Furthermore

, the

raspbery

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raspberry

was less than

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2.8% in 2009. whilst, it

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slowly rose

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5% after 4 years

then

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,

stablized

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stabilized

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5.5% in 2014.