An increasing number of people choose to live in big cities. what problems will this brings, how should the government encourage

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modern era, the majority of

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are shifting to urban

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for better facilities and jobs.

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essay shall shed light upon the various

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related to

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situation

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some ways to address

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issue. Foremost, the prominent obstacle faced by

cities

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because of migration is that it

create

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housing

problems

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. If

people

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move to metropolitan

areas

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, they would suffer from

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of accommodation with

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builders build houses for those

people

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who love to reside in

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areas

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. So they clear land and it will create deforestation hurdles.

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, it

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increase

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pollution. when

people

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choose to live in big

cities

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, the quality of air would decrease because

people

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more

uses

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of

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apply

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private vehicles rather than public transport which

emit

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the

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toxic gasses.

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, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that 90% of

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are not only facing housing

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but

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pollution.

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, it puts

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affect

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on

countries

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countries'

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development. Despite the

above mentioned

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issues, there is a solution. The main

mitigatting

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mitigating

factor is that government need to provide job opportunities in

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the countrysides

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countrysides

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. Once higher authorities give occupations to citizens of villages, they could never shift to

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as they may earn money in their

areas

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without going anywhere.

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, it is published article by The Tribune newspaper showed that

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in

India

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statutory

body

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gave job facilities to

people

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of undeveloped

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with the help of

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enviornment

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environment

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protect

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from

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themselves from

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bad air quality and

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deforestation.

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, it is fruitful for

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.

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,

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there are

few

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problems

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when commoners move

in

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the big

cities

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first

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of all, it

enchance

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enhance

enhances

problem

of

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with

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housing and

save

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from harmful gasses, the council need to provide amenities

of

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for

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occupation.