Some cities havevehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcych/5are banned from the city center People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro cvehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweiglothe disadvantages?
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some cities have vehicles-free days when private cars,trucks and
motorcych
are banned from the city centre people are encouraged to use public transportation Correct your spelling
motorcycles
such
as buses,taxis,and metro vehicle-free days ,in my opinion,the disadvantage of this
trend outweigh the advantage.
on one hand,this
trend has some advantages. vehicle-free day help control air pollution
in urban
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an urban
the urban
city
,and Fix the agreement mistake
cities
also
, co2 it is a main source of cars emission,,
these will lead to Change the punctuation
apply
pollution
,at
the same time their temperature will increase,Correct word choice
and at
therefore
,avoiding driving cars,this
help reduce participant pollution
.io re9on the other hand , even with these advantages ,i
believe these ideas has a large number of disadvantages.Change the capitalization
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firstly
. avoiding using private -vehiclesin
a short time will increase the stress in public transport.Correct your spelling
vehicles in
vehicles
secondly
, during the crowed.and it is hard for people to adapt.though this
may reduce the pollution
and temperature on specific days, it is not a permanent solution to these problems.the government should invest heavily in public transport and make it comfortable so that people develop a habit of travelling by bus or train.
in conclusion ,i
think that the idea of a vehicle-free day has more problems than benefits,even can reduce air Change the capitalization
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pollution
,but it is not a permanent solution to traffic relative problems.Submitted by 992127079 on
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