Some cities havevehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcych/5are banned from the city center People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro cvehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweiglothe disadvantages?

some cities have vehicles-free days when private cars,trucks and
motorcych
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motorcycles
are banned from the city centre people are encouraged to use public transportation
such
as buses,taxis,and metro vehicle-free days ,in my opinion,the disadvantage of
this
trend outweigh the advantage. on one hand,
this
trend has some advantages. vehicle-free day help control air
pollution
in
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also
, co2 it is a main source of cars emission,
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these will lead to
pollution
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the same time their temperature will increase,
therefore
,avoiding driving cars,
this
help reduce participant
pollution
.io re9on the other hand , even with these advantages ,
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believe these ideas has a large number of disadvantages.
firstly
. avoiding using private -
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vehicles in
vehicles
a short time will increase the stress in public transport.
secondly
, during the crowed.and it is hard for people to adapt.though
this
may reduce the
pollution
and temperature on specific days, it is not a permanent solution to these problems.the government should invest heavily in public transport and make it comfortable so that people develop a habit of travelling by bus or train. in conclusion ,
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think that the idea of a vehicle-free day has more problems than benefits,even can reduce air
pollution
,but it is not a permanent solution to traffic relative problems.
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