Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations. Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?

Generally, the public read
newspapers
to find out about the world's current affairs and they read
magazines
to be entertained.
Therefore
, one would expect to find articles that feature the private lives of famous people in
magazines
rather than
newspapers
.
However
, nowadays, more and more
newspapers
include stories like these which are neither informative nor useful. In my opinion,
this
type of gossip about the public's private lives should not be in
newspapers
for several reasons.
Firstly
,
for example
, the fact that Princess Diana is going out with a sportsman is not important news.
Secondly
, if
newspapers
want to publish articles about the famous public they should focus on their public events and achievements.
In other words
, if there is an article about Princess Diana it should be about her works of charity,which will increase awareness of important problems.
In addition
, journalists should make sure that they write about the facts only, not rumours. One should be able to rely on
newspapers
for the actual truth.
Magazines
on the other hand
focus on social news. But I feel it is more acceptable for them to contain some features about famous personalities.
In addition
to being popular reading, these stories often benefit the stars by giving free publicity to them, thereby helping their careers.
However
, I
also
believe that magazine stories should not mention things that are too embarrassing or untrue just to attract the public to buy the
magazines
. In conclusion, I think
newspapers
should concentrate on real news but
magazines
can feature some articles on the public's private lives.
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