COMPUTER AND AI ARE BEING INCREASINGLY BEING USED FOR ONLINE EDUCATION. CAN AI ENHANCES THE LEARNING EXPERIENCE? IS THIS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

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IN AN EVER-PROGRESSIVE SOCIETY, COMPUTER AND ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE ROLES ARE BECOMING MORE AND MORE SALIENT FOR EDUCATIONAL PURPOSES ON THE INTERNET PLATFORMS. IN LIGHT OF

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, THE OPINION OF THE WRITER CONTENDS THAT THE STUDY QUALITY WILL BE ENHANCED BY TECHNOLOGICAL FACTORS

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THE AVAILABLE ACCESSIBILITY TO ONLINE MATERIALS AND YET IT IS A POSITIVE INNOVATION AS IT STIMULATE EXCITEMENT DURING THE LEARNING PROCESS. IT IS VITAL TO UNDERSTAND THAT THE AVAILABILITY OF ACADEMIC MATERIALS WILL INTENSIFY THE ACADEMIC

EXPERIENCE

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, COMPUTER OR AI CONTRIBUTORS CAN PENETRATE ONLINE INFORMATION STORAGE ANYWHERE OR AT ANY GIVEN TIME. AS A NATURAL OUTCOME, IT WOULD BE CONVENIENT FOR UTILIZERS TO SEARCH FOR EDUCATIONAL DOCUMENTS OR

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REFURBISH SELF-STUDY

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WITHOUT CONCERN ABOUT LOCATIONAL OR TIME LIMITATIONS. TAKING WIKIPEDIA AS A REMARKABLE EXAMPLE,

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INFORMATION-PROVIDED WEBSITE WILL SUPPLY

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DETAILED INFORMATION ABOUT MOST OF THE CONCERNING ASPECTS OF OUR SOCIETY NOWADAYS. IN REGARD OF TECHNOLOGICAL APPLICATION IN ONLINE EDUCATION FIELDS, IT IS EVIDENT THAT EDUCATIONAL INSPIRATION WILL BRING A POSITIVE CHANGE TO LEARNER'S

EXPERIENCE

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. TO BE SPECIFIC, COMPUTERS AND AI ARE CAPABLE OF INCREASING STUDY PACE AND PROVIDING MORE CONVENIENCE FOR THE USERS.

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, STUDENTS WILL FIND ONLINE EDUCATION, WHICH IS SUPPORTED BY AI FACTORS, IS FAR MORE EFFECTIVE AND COMFORTABLE COMPARED TO TRADITIONAL LEARNING STRATEGIES. TO EXEMPLIFY

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STATEMENT,IN ASOCIAL SURVEY AT JUJUSTU HIGH SCHOOL, TUTEES PREFER ONLINE ASSIGNMENTS TO PAPER-WRITING HOMEWORK AS STUDENTS COULD UTILIZE VARIOUS ACADEMIC FUNCTIONS TO IMPROVE THE HOMEWORK OUTPUT. TAKING ALL POINTS INTO ACCOUNT, IT IS CLEARLY DEMONSTRATED THAT AI AND COMPUTER IMPLEMENT IN STUDY

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CAN REINFORCE LEARNING OUTPUT AS A WHOLE.

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, IT IS

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CLEARLY SHOWN THAT

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IS A BENEFICIAL ADJUSTMENT AS IT IS CAPABLE OF HEIGHTENING PUPILS ' EDUCATIONAL INTEREST.

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Task Achievement

Ensure a balanced presentation of arguments, including potential drawbacks or challenges associated with the use of AI in education to provide a more comprehensive exploration of the topic.

Coherence and Cohesion

While your essay is generally well-organized, using a wider variety of linking words and phrases could enhance the flow and cohesion of your arguments.

General

Proofread to avoid the use of all capital letters throughout the essay, as it can be distracting and is typically considered incorrect in formal writing.

Content

Provided a clear stance on the topic, supporting it with relevant examples.

Structure

Structured the essay with a distinct introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.

Examples

Effectively used examples to support your points, such as the Wikipedia reference.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

292 words

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COMPUTER AND AI ARE BEING INCREASINGLY BEING USED FOR ONLINE EDUCATION. CAN AI ENHANCES THE LEARNING EXPERIENCE? IS THIS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to older more traditional values such as respect for the and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people judge success solely by money and material possessions. however, success can be achieved or measured in other ways. What are your opinion about this subject?

Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming more popular. Some feels this is a positive trend ,while others don't. what's your opinion?

In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?