The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

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information about the number of people that went abroad in four different

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Overall

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, international travel became popular over the

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. Comparing the five parts of the world,

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Europe was the

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destinations

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East was the least.

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were Europe, Asia and the

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. Europe almost doubled their numbers of visitors in 15

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spam from 280,2

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to 400,2

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, followed by Asia and Pacific

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had a significant increase to 135,8

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in 2005 when they were just 60,2

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in 1990. The two least visited parts,

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and

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had a rise in international travelling,

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not that significant. Between 1995 and 2000 America had

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increase of more than 6

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in the following 5

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from 118, 2 to 112,2

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Topic Vocabulary:

significant increase
international travel
popular destinations
economic growth
technological advancements
ease of travel
cultural exchange
globalization
fluctuations
trend
millions of travelers
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