Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is usually argued that only governments and big companies can create an impact on the
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and that an ordinary man can do nothing about it.
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I do believe that
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and large companies have the necessary resources and manpower to change the world, I,
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, completely disagree with the fact that an individual can not make any difference in improving the
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.
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, I believe awareness is like a chain reaction that starts from one person and spreads through society. No matter what actions governments take, a change can only happen when we start caring about the
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on an individual level.
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, when the Prime minister of India initiated
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India Campaign', it was only successful when people started to clean their surroundings individually. By the end of it, we had a cleaner and greener India.
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, it is more important that a person works personally,
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making others aware, to make the
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better.
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, I believe an individual can not only participate in making the
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better
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but can
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help to prevent it from getting worse.
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, big governments provide gas and petroleum for
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ordinary
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to use in their personal vehicles. But it is up to the individual, whether he or she exploits the non-renewable natural resource or
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public transportation.
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it is up to them
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if they choose an affordable means and not leave their economic footprints. In conclusion, I would like to favour the fact that a person, in himself or herself can be of significance in making our earth healthier, cleaner and greener.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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