The chart below show the number of Japanese tourist travelling abroad between 1985 1995
The bar 6% in the year 1995. The lowest percentage was 5 million in 1985 and
chart
shows the proportion of Japanese
tourists travelling to other countries and the line chart
provides information about Japanese
tourists who visited Australia
from 1985 to 1995, a period of 12 years,
Overall
, from 1985-1988 the percentage of Japanese
people
who travel abroad and to Australia
greatly increased. In addition
, in 1995 the proportion of travelling abroad was highest than every year.In ,contrast the total of Japanese
people
who travelled to Australia
went down in 1995.
In the bar chart
, Japanese
people
who travelled abroad were 15 million and travelling in Australia
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was
then
slightly increased until 1990.
In the line chart
, Japanese
people
were travelled in Australia
from 1985 to 1988 increased from 1% to 5% and slow down in the year 1989 was at 4%Submitted by itchayatop31 on
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