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The chart below show the number of Japanese tourist travelling abroad between 1985 1995

The chart below show the number of Japanese tourist travelling abroad between 1985 1995
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The bar
chart
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 shows the proportion of
Japanese
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 tourists travelling to other countries and the line
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 provides information about
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 tourists who visited
Australia
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 from 1985 to 1995, a period of 12 years,
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, from 1985-1988 the percentage of
Japanese
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people
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 who travel abroad and to
Australia
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 greatly increased.
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, in 1995 the proportion of travelling abroad was highest than every year.In ,contrast the total of
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people
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 who travelled to
Australia
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 went down in 1995. In the bar
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,
Japanese
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people
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 who travelled abroad were 15 million and travelling in
Australia
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6% in the year 1995. The lowest percentage was 5 million in 1985 and
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 slightly increased until 1990. In the line
chart
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,
Japanese
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people
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 were travelled in
Australia
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 from 1985 to 1988 increased from 1% to 5% and slow down in the year 1989 was at 4%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, japanese, australia, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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