Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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modern era, many

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believe that the extinction of some species of plants and

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is the main problem for the human environment,

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others say that there are more important environmental matters. I agree with the latter opinion and

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essay will discuss both views. To start with, there are two compelling reasons why

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believe that the loss of flora and fauna is a paramount environmental problem.

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reason is that since most

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on earth are multicultural and they eat different types of food that come from

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and greeneries, preserving both flora and fauna is paramount for human survival.

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, in eastern areas of

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such

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as Papua, for many centuries most individuals have been conserving

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specific plant which is famously known as

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as their main food resource to survive

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because rice is expensive and cannot be planted in that area. The second reason is that the existence of particular species of

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is significant for country icons. Orangutans are known as

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of the endangered

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in

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, and their presence is

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of the most iconic of

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uniqueness

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to attract a lot of tourists.

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, if orangutans are extinct,

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will lose

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of their icons, and the number of tourists might decrease. In stark contrast, I believe that other environmental problems

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as

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and air

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are more vital.

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, the enormous amount of

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in all

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countries can spread many

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to our

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.

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such

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as skin infection, tetanus, and malaria are deadly

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that are caused by the accumulation of

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that

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not handled properly. If the government and

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do not put their concern into solving

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problems, these

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will be spreading and

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many

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all over the world.

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, air

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is a crucial problem because it can

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greenhouse

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, which can negatively affect our environment. Pollutants

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an immense amount of carbon to be gathered in the earth's atmosphere,

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chemical reaction blocks the heat radiation from our planets to come out from the atmosphere.

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,

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phenomenon can

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the earth to become hotter, and

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subsequently

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it can melt the ice in Antarctica, which can

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big floods in the world. In conclusion,

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many individuals believe that protecting flora and fauna is important for human survival and

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iconic symbols, I argue that

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and

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environmental problems are more important since they can

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many

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and greenhouse gasses. Given

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situation, the government should put more focus on handling the

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treatment and making some regulations to reduce air

pollution

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such

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as limiting the number of vehicles on the road.