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Some people think that we should use traditional methods to solve our problems, others say that we should use modern methods. Give your opinion and also explain how important is to use new methods.

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There are multiple ways to solve the
problems
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 both traditional and modern. Some
people
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 argue that the way how to solve issues is a common way
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 others support new techniques. In
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 essay, I would discuss the benefits of using alternative
methods
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 over antique ones
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 give my opinion on the matter. To start with, with developed technology it is easier to find information that was not accessible before. Back in the day,
people
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 would turn to books to find the best
methods
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 of fixing an issue. That can be time-consuming and not effective.
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, these days the best
methods
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 are in the palm of your hand. Many apps show videos and advice in less than a minute.
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, Google can provide you with different
methods
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 of problem-solving in video and text format that can be handy for
people
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 of different ages and intellectual abilities.
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, since there are new habits and customs among
people
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, there are
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 needed new ways to put up with or treat those
problems
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. The interaction and communication between
people
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 have changed in the
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 decade and it has promoted unknown issues that must be treated with modern
methods
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.
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, the new wave of anxiety, depression and post-pandemic stress had led individuals to explore new
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 to develop solve-problem skills. In conclusion, modern
methods
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 are less time-consuming and more effective ways to deal with modern
problems
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. As long as I am concerned, as there are new issues, new
methods
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 are required to effectively solve those
problems
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 in modern times.
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