With growing population in cities, more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it a positive or negative development?

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day and age, people are pouring into high-density cities,

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leading to the diminishment of living quarters and outdoor spaces. From my perspective,

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is undoubtedly a negative development for several reasons.

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with, sharing a small apartment with other family members means that privacy can easily be violated.

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living under a small roof, people need to share their personal space with other members or use the same room for several purposes,

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, the bedroom can

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be utilized as a dressing room and storage.

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can lead to several awkward situations that can be avoided with ease had the accommodation been bigger.

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, the lack of outdoor spaces can lead to depression and laziness. Kids who are being constrained in a limited area will not have much chance to interact with their peers,

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can lead to depression, and longtime exposure to

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environment can result in laziness, since children,

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,adults are used to the inactive lifestyle.

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but not least, as citizens flock to big cities, the price to acquire real estate will soar, since the supply is not sufficient enough to meet the demand of society

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and become a financial obstacle for young adults.

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, the housing price in Hanoi in the same location would become two, even three times compared to the

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years, and the closer to the city centre, the higher the cost. That being said, renting or purchasing a smaller apartment seems to be more economical, as homeowners can reserve money for other purposes.

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proved to be better in some aspects. As mentioned above, a small living quarter means that kids do not have enough space to develop both mentally and physically,

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a larger house could be the solution to solve these issues. Taking a garden as an example, it can provide a playground for kids,

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enhancing their immune systems and helping grown-ups to release stress and mend their souls. In conclusion, a modest accommodation can be beneficial in terms of finance,

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, it has detrimental effects on other aspects of life,

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as a healthy lifestyle and privacy.

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, choosing a big city to settle in is not always the best idea, and humans should base it on their personal situations to make the right decision.