In some cultures, childrens are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

nowadays , there are a variety of cultures which encourage

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to try hard

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achieve everything they want. in

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method. achieving everything has one condition, you should try hard. if

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accept

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sentence they will try more and more because motivation increased in their life. increasing their attempts and motivation

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they reach their dreams plus goals and everything they love

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they can work in a position that has been wanted since

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they understand

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in their life because they know that achieving their aims or dreams does not happen overnight and they must try more than usual for years ,

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they practice

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and avoid rushing. For ,example

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Oxford ,University there is a direct connection between

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and bringing off to aim.their statistics are shown that people who are patient and

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try hard can achieve everything rather than others. on the other ,hand

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thinking has some disadvantages. wrong thinking arises in minds of

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who accept

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theory. they think that only their efforts are effective to gain anything and ignore the rest of the other factors

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cannot carry off their dreams and get depressed. they should understand that their effort is one factor among thousands of factors to succeed and if they struggle hard they may arrive at everything.,

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a false self-confidence is created in them. they misunderstand their ability and will get everything to chance except their effort , so going to the wrong way in life and waste it.for ,instance my friend made an effort to play basketball but he wasn't tall. he thought everything is tried,

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he could not get success after ten years and wasted his youth. in ,conclusion increasing motivation and

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among

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are two advantages of

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method and wrong thinking and

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false self-confidence is two disadvantages of

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