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Somepeople say it is important to keep your home and work place tidy,with every thing organised and correct place.what is your opinion about this.

#somepeople #home #work #place
It is well
said
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 "Cleanliness is near to God".It is suggested by many people that there should be kept the residence and
office
 in a clean and tidy environment where the thing are in a right place.I totally agree
on
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this
 statement because it
ensure
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the
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health , protect from potential hazard and increases
the
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work efficiency at both places.
Firstly
 people are very busy at their
job
 from early morning to late evening for their livelihood.It allows hardly to manage the house properly.It has
seen
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sometime
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sometimes
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 that
the
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electric appliances
such
 as Aircondition,
fan
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fans
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,water
heater
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heaters
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 and kitchen
oven
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ovens
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,lights are
leave
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left
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 on even no one is at home.Neither it is economical nor they are safe.
Sometime
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 difficult to find
a
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apply
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valuable things or a document at the
propertime
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proper time
.
Further more
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,It is
embaressing
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embarrassing
 sometime when visitors,relatives and friends visit
to
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the house.There would not be
proper
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the proper
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 place to seat or to offer something for
hospitallity
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hospitality
.
Secondly
,A
well managed
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well-managed
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 & tidy
office
 gives a good impression ,
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a
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good workout turn and
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a qucker
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qucker
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quick
 way to accomplish the
job
.If the files and documents are
at
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in
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 the right place in absence of the appointed
person
 for the
job
, a new
person
 can carry the
job
 forward without any difficulties.It creates a good impression
to
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 the new
person
 and
office
 and officer.In India
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,
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A
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 incident truly
fit
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fits
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to
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this
 .An old
person
 was visiting the
office
 for his pension and the file was pending
due to
 the transfer of the previous sanction authority.The new officer who was recently posted was able to grant it
due to
eassy acsees
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easy access
 to the document.
Finally
,In conclusion,Not only a
well managed
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house and
workside
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worksite
work side
creates
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create
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 a healthy
enviornment
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environment
In my opinion
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 it
also
 put a high level of
impresstion
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impression
to visitors ,safe and present work capacity.People
shoud
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should
 spend
little
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a little
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 time
to
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apply
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organise
at
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both despite of busy
schedual
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schedule
 for a better life.
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