The graph shows the nebberredfteverseas vigtters lEuredicted different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the nebberredfteverseas vigtters lEuredicted different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the line graph illustrates the three different areas
includ
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including
include
the
coast
, mountains and
lakes
in
european
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European
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country
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countries
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from 1987 to 2007 over 20 year period. the
figure
for the three
area
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all showed an upward trend , and the
coast
was the most popular area ,the
figure
showed
significantly
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increased ,but the
figure
for the
lakes
was lowest than other areas . in 1987,the
figure
for the
lakes
was lowest at 10
thousands
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,and the
figures
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figure
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for the mountains
was
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were
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higher than
lakes
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for lakes
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at 20 ,these two areas all showed
increased
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an increased
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trend .meanwhile ,only the
figure
for the
coast
showed a downward trend. in
the
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1992, two trends
of
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for
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the mountain and
lakes
increased
conversely
,the
figure
for the
lakes
increased dramatically up to
the
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75 in 2002 ,and the mountains showed fluctuated in the next 15 years .and the
figure
for the
coast
increased significantly
for
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35 in 2002 to 77 in 2007 over the
figure
for the
lakes
.and the
lakes
decreased rapidly to 50 in 2007.
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