Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled and that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The view held by some is that the authorities should impose new laws to legally demand households to send more items into recycling bins.
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may not be the best solution to the garbage problem.
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, it is very unclear how tracking who properly gets rid of unnecessary household things should be done. Conducting research to figure out the best approach would require investing an enormous amount of funds. In fact, there have been cases in the past when costly studies did not discover efficient technologies to find solutions to environmental issues.
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, one disadvantage is the potential risk of losing
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dollars that came from the population's taxes.
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, a possible way to watch who does proper waste utilization would imply installing cameras and other artificial intelligence sensors on top of or around the recycle bins.
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detailed tracking will be way too intimidating for some citizens and that might lead to an
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decrease in society's mental health.
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, someone would be constantly feeling irritated from being watched over through the devices and,
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, she or he might develop depression. To summarize, in my
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the increased mind control causing paranoia combined with the number of resources needed in order to invent a system that collects personal recycling data does not make it viable to implement legal rules regarding items' clearance.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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