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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025.
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The bar chart shows the changes in International tourism, Diary and Meat products for Southland trades in three different years, 2000, 2020, and 2025. The most noticeable trend is that International tourism regularly increases throughout the period. Dairy Merchandise
initially
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 peak and slightly drops in the future projection;
whereas
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 Meat goods constantly decrease,
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 the data seems that International tourism from £ 8
billion
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 in 2000 has increased slightly and now in 2020, has reached £ 9
billion
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.It is estimated that international travel will reach £ 10
billion
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 in 2025. About dairy stuff from £ 7
billion
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 in ,2000 the exportation has grown in 2020 with a peak of almost £ 10
billion
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,to lightly drop to £ 9,5
billion
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 in 2025's prediction. As concerns Meat ,output the features show production of £ 6
billion
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 in 2000 that has fallen to 5,5
billion
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 in 2020. It is predicted that sales will continue to decrease in future.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports, main exports, projections, trends, significant changes, increased, decreased, speculate, external factors, global demand, technological advancements, trade policies, agriculture, technology, manufacturing, economic implications, employment, GDP, economic growth, global economic trends
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