Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear……………………,

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Dear Susan, I hope you are doing well. Thank you for your birthday gift. I really love

this

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purse

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. It is a very practical and thoughtful gift for me. I was surprised that you noticed that my

purse

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was broken. There is a tiny hole beneath the coin pocket in my

purse

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. I just thought about replacing it one day. How coincident it is.

Also

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, I love

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this

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the

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brand Gucci. I am a decent and loyal fan

about

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their products. Their leather purses are high quality and the designs are always fancy and fascinating. I really love the gift you gave me, especially

multiple

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the multiple

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layers in

this

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purse

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Thus

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, I can have a lot of space to place tons of cards,

such

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as ID cards, credit cards, and a driving

license

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licenses

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. In order to show my appreciation, I would like to invite you to come to my house and have

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apply

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dinner on March 24. I will prepare some authentic Taiwanese food

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for

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you and prepare your

favor

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favourite

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Taiwanese beef needle soup

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for

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you as well. I am looking forward

your

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to your

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reply and seeing you. Best regards, Kathy

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

188 words

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