Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear……………………,

Dear Susan, I hope you are doing well. Thank you for your birthday gift. I really love
this
purse
. It is a very practical and thoughtful gift for me. I was surprised that you noticed that my
purse
was broken. There is a tiny hole beneath the coin pocket in my
purse
. I just thought about replacing it one day. How coincident it is.
Also
, I love
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brand Gucci. I am a decent and loyal fan
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their products. Their leather purses are high quality and the designs are always fancy and fascinating. I really love the gift you gave me, especially
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layers in
this
purse
.
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, I can have a lot of space to place tons of cards,
such
as ID cards, credit cards, and a driving
license
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. In order to show my appreciation, I would like to invite you to come to my house and have
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dinner on March 24. I will prepare some authentic Taiwanese food
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you and prepare your
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Taiwanese beef needle soup
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you as well. I am looking forward
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reply and seeing you. Best regards, Kathy
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