You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter: ● Say which edition and when did the article appear ● Explain why you lost contact with your friend ● Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch

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Dear Sir or Madam

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is in regards to an article published on 27th January in your newspaper Daily Tribune about Mr Sam martin.The article is about How the fintech industry is changing the landscape of banking nowadays. It's a half-page article about his opinion on the latest technology trends in the banking industry .

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, I like to inform you that he is my college days friend with whom I lost contact because of moving out of Dublin in the year 2017 because of a job transfer. As I had to move to London . Office work and other priorities have led to the loss of communication with him. So I request you to please provide his contact details like his personal mobile number and his personal email . Once I received these details I will try to get in touch with him either by calling him or by sending an email to his personal email id. Looking forward to your quick reply . Yours Faithfully JOHN GREY

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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