Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
One of the social concerns today relates to children’s education.
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it is commonly argued that the most influential years of a youngster’s growth are before beginning school, others believe that their teenage years will have the biggest impact on their future life.
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that experiences as a child before entering an institution are the most crucial pace. The main reason is that a kid spends the vast majority of date living in the care of parents during these years. Correct quantifier usage
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begins to develop emotionally and socially at these times. Another reason is that before starting school, the neural pathways within a youngster’s brain are developing at an extremely high rate. It is Linking Words
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is if parents educate a kid with the correct method, he will perform and cope with realistic situations well. Linking Words
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, those early experiences will be a solid basement for them to obtain anything when they go to the academy.
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, it is strongly believed by others that a juvenile’s teenage age will play a more vital role in determining their future growth. People often have Linking Words
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as teachers and friends, impact their behaviour and thinking firmly. A particularly good example here is when they begin to make their first own decisions and bear the consequences of those choices, they will learn and remember better. A second point is that teenagers are highly influenced by their peers. In fact, the closest friends are, the more similar behaviour is. Linking Words
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In conclusion, experiences as a youngster can affect their adult growth. Linking Words
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, I believe that the school moment that teenagers have can equally influence their future. More importantly, both children and teenagers should be educated appropriately and carefully.Linking Words
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