The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts provide information about the age of the communities of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050.
Overall
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, Yemen's
population
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will tend to be younger,
whereas
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Italy will be dominated by the elderly by guesses. When we look at Yemen's pie charts in detail, in 2000, only 3.6% of the
population
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was more than 60 years old. The children rate, which is 0-14 years old, was 50.1%, and adults were 46.3%.
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, the children's rate will decrease to 37% in 2050. At
this
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time, the adult and old populations will increase, which are 57.3% and 5.7%, respectively. When we look at Italian age charts in detail, the children
population
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was 14.3% in 2000, but in 2050, that point will decrease by 2.8% and it will be 11.5%. The Italian adult
population
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was 61.6%, and the elderly
population
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was 24.1% in 2000. In the future, the adult rate will go down sharply to 46.2%.
On the other hand
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, the old
population
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will increase and it will reach 42.3% respectively
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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