some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to make people recycle more is to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

One of the most controversial issues around the world is
environment
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and
every thing
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that
related
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to it,
such
as recycling.Meanwhile,some
people
believe the amount of garbage that
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from
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home is not enough and recycle should be compulsory by
governments
.I partially agree with
this
statement and I believe it can be an effective
way
,but, there are many other factors that can be useful to persuade
people
to recycle.In
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I will explain more with some relevant
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. On the one hand,
people
who think the best
way
for recycling is legalization,have some reasons and there
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numerous
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legalization
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of
recycle
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.First of all,
beacuse
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of
people
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tendency
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to use more plastic
of
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glass products that
they
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are not environment-friendly and
also
it
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take
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more than a century to dispose of,we need more observation and we should take
a serious decisions
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.In
this
way
,if
governments
pass laws and strict rules for
people
who
dont
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don't
recycle their waste,they will force
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reuse or recycle them.Another positive
way
to force
people
to recycle is
also
impose
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.In many developed countries
such
as Germany,Austria and Switzerland that recycle is legal.
People
who do not recycle
they
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have to pay
fine
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.
On the other hand
,there are many other aspects,that encourage
people
to pay more attention
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recycling.
Firstly
,
governments
,
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should do some
differents
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activities to increase
people
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knowledge about
importance
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of recycling.
For example
,in Japan,from primary
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teachers learn
student
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students
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to reuse their plastic or glass
bottle
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bottles
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or recycle them.
In addition
,
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authorities
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should provide and improve the
recycle
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infrastructure in their country.In Germany,
government
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put many
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equipment around the country to encourage their citizen to recycle their waste,
besides
,when they recycle their plastic they can get money or other products for free.
To sum up
,it is clear,
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governments
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duties in
this
issue should not be taken lightly,but , every person as a citizen of the earth has
a huge responsibilities
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toward their
surrounding
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and help to recycle or reuse domestic waste.I believe with the cooperation of both we can gain the desired result.
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