some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to make people recycle more is to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
One of the most controversial issues around the world is
environment
and Correct article usage
the environment
every thing
that Correct your spelling
everything
related
to it,Add a missing verb
is related
such
as recycling.Meanwhile,some people
believe the amount of garbage that recycle
Change the verb form
recycles
from
home is not enough and recycle should be compulsory by Change preposition
at
governments
.I partially agree with this
statement and I believe it can be an effective way
,but, there are many other factors that can be useful to persuade people
to recycle.In this
essay
I will explain more with some relevant Add a comma
,essay
example
.
On the one hand,Fix the agreement mistake
examples
people
who think the best way
for recycling is legalization,have some reasons and there are
numerous Change the verb form
is
benefit
Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
in
Change preposition
to
legalization
of Add an article
the legalization
recycle
.First of all,Wrong verb form
recycling
beacuse
of Correct your spelling
because
people
Change noun form
people's
tendency
to use more plastic Replace the word
tend
of
glass products that Change preposition
apply
they
are not environment-friendly and Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
take
more than a century to dispose of,we need more observation and we should take Change the verb form
takes
a serious decisions
.In Correct the article-noun agreement
serious decisions
a serious decision
this
way
,if governments
pass laws and strict rules for people
who dont
recycle their waste,they will force Correct your spelling
don't
to
reuse or recycle them.Another positive Correct pronoun usage
them to
way
to force people
to recycle is also
impose
Fix the infinitive
to impose
Add an article
a fine
the fine
fine
.In many developed countries Fix the agreement mistake
fines
such
as Germany,Austria and Switzerland that recycle is legal.People
who do not recycle they
have to pay Correct pronoun usage
apply
fine
.
Correct article usage
a fine
On the other hand
,there are many other aspects,that encourage people
to pay more attention about
recycling.Change preposition
to
Firstly
,governments
,
should do some Remove the comma
apply
differents
activities to increase Correct your spelling
different
people
knowledge about Change noun form
people's
importance
of recycling.Add an article
the importance
For example
,in Japan,from primary school
teachers learn Add a comma
,school
student
to reuse their plastic or glass Fix the agreement mistake
students
bottle
or recycle them.Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
In addition
,authirities
Correct your spelling
authorities
,
should provide and improve the Remove the comma
apply
recycle
infrastructure in their country.In Germany,Change the verb form
recycling
government
put many Add an article
the government
recycle
equipment around the country to encourage their citizen to recycle their waste,Replace the word
recycling
besides
,when they recycle their plastic they can get money or other products for free.
To sum up
,it is clear,Correct article usage
the governments
governments
duties in Change noun form
governments'
government's
this
issue should not be taken lightly,but , every person as a citizen of the earth has a huge responsibilities
toward their Correct the article-noun agreement
a huge responsibility
huge responsibilities
surrounding
and help to recycle or reuse domestic waste.I believe with the cooperation of both we can gain the desired result.Fix the agreement mistake
surroundings
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