Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Nowadays it is thought by some people that
e-
books
are the death of paper
books
.
Otherwise
, others believe that it's impossible for paper
books
to disappear. From my
perseption
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perception
, both types have their
adventages
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advantages
and
disadventages
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disadvantages
. In the following
paragraphs
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I will explain my point.
Firstly
, talking about
e-
books
,
they
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are universal.
For
example
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,example
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you can carry so many
textes
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texts
using only one small device. That's where paper
books
have no
chances
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chance
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. Taking only a few huge ones will
full
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fill
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your bag to the end.
Also
,
e-
books
are more
resistable
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resistant
to any damage, you can't cut
it
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them
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off easily. But on the other
side
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it is proven by
sientists
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scientists
, that reading from the monitor is less
helthy
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healthy
for your eyes.
Therefore
electonical
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electronic
electrical
books
are not so good, as it's thought by most of
users
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the users
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.
Secondly
, if we talk about classic
books
, they can be used even without
electicity
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electricity
, when using
e-book
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e-books
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requires it for
the
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charging. You can take one
to
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on
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the trip and do not worry that it will be out of energy. For
me
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,me
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it's a big
plesure
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pleasure
to read some book near the fire, and I can't imagine it using
the
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an
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e-book. It just feels wrong. In conclusion, it's obvious that we won't see the end of the usual
books
in the
comming
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coming
future, as they still have a
lot
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benefits,
comparing
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compared
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with
e-
books
.
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