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Social media has become a regular part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the contemporary world, technology become increasing especially social
media
.
Therefore
, some
people
 think that social network has a negative impact,
while
 others
people
 think that social
media
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brings a lot of benefits. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the pros outweigh of cons the
media
 platforms.
To begin
 with, nowadays most
people
 have obsessed with social
media
 particularly teenagers
due to
 their having it available all day.
Moreover
, social
media
 has many advantages that outweigh the disadvantages.
Firstly
, many
people
 confessed that social platform changes their life, so it has an impact on developing themselves and raising their knowledge. To illustrate,
last
 week I watched a program on television called AB talks, it talks about how to explore other countries by developing their language, which results in to increase in their information about various countries' cultures
due to
 getting through their languages and enjoying their journey.
Although
 graduated students sometimes they founded difficulty getting jobs, recently social
media
 has increased significantly opportunities for jobs.
In addition
, some companies advertise new occupation jobs or cooperation training by using social
media
.
For instance
, my friend had got cooperation training in SASO company via Linkedin, so she had learned a lot of information like how to write a report.
However
,
the
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one disadvantage of using social
media
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 affected children's behaviour.
This
 may be
due to
 getting overweight because all day they are playing games. In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both points of view, I believe that social
media
 affects a lot of
people
 in a positive way outweighs drawbacks, which results will be raising the horizon of society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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