The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The pie chart and graph illustrate some percentages about

Coca-Cola

's unit case volume by region in 2000 and share

prices

Firstly

, there was an increase between the years 1996 and 1997 in

Coca-Cola

prices

to 70. Followed by a slight drop,

then

it increased again to 80 in 1998.

Moreover

, the

prices

kept decreasing until the year 2000 to almost 40,

then

Correct pronoun usage

they

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rose again in 2001 to 60.

Secondly

, the largest proportion of sales of

Coca-Cola

's unit case volume by region in 2000 was in North America, 30.4 of the total.

Therefore

, the second biggest number in sales is in Latin America, 25.7. For the 3rd place comes Europe at 20.5.

In addition

, the least two regions were in Asia

and

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

(Africa and the Middle East), 16.4 and 7,0.

Overall

Coca-Cola

prices

in the year 1998 were the highest among other years,

although

they were at their lowest in 1996.

Also

Coca-Cola

sales were the most in North America and the least in (Africa and the Middle East).

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9Linking words
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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

171 words

7.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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