The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The pie chart and graph illustrate some percentages about

Coca-Cola

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's unit case volume by region in 2000 and share

prices

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Firstly

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, there was an increase between the years 1996 and 1997 in

Coca-Cola

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prices

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to 70. Followed by a slight drop,

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it increased again to 80 in 1998.

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, the

prices

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kept decreasing until the year 2000 to almost 40,

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rose again in 2001 to 60.

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, the largest proportion of sales of

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's unit case volume by region in 2000 was in North America, 30.4 of the total.

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, the second biggest number in sales is in Latin America, 25.7. For the 3rd place comes Europe at 20.5.

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, the least two regions were in Asia

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(Africa and the Middle East), 16.4 and 7,0.

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Coca-Cola

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prices

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in the year 1998 were the highest among other years,

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they were at their lowest in 1996.

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Coca-Cola

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sales were the most in North America and the least in (Africa and the Middle East).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coca-cola, prices with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

fluctuations
market share
geographic distribution
revenue
financial performance
quarterly reports
shareholder
economic indicators
consumer behavior
aggregate data
profit margins
fiscal period
trend analysis
variance
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