Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant area of cities and towns .while other believe housing facilities should be built instead. Do agree or disagree?

the plantation is very important for the environment,there are a few reasons,why

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strongly agree

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,will describe positive things that happened by plants. there are many advantages are there for planting trees,people should encourage citizens to the plantation to get more benefits ,

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-if trees are planted on the roadside ,there is so much shade ,which we hid from the sun,it can prevent sunstroke,and

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exchange of CO2, preventing environmental pollution.

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: the government taking initiation and planning roadside,so that they will provide shad beside the road, greenery is there at schools, offices and houses are surrounded by flora,there many other methods like,terrace gardens, and gardening

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so that people can eat natural organic food,which is healthy food and

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satisfaction than,eating home-based food, which helps kids to learn about forming the plants

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they know about how it harvested, for ,example kids are more enthusiastic to learn about new things and

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it's playful things for kids to plant plants,and water them every day they could enjoy and

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love the work they do. in ,conclusion self-forming and growing vegetation is good for health

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the environment,so government should encourage people to grow trees and vegetation at home and in available areas ,arranging programs like,go green ,and environment day so that everyone comes together and participates at least a day without missing it.