Discuss advantages and disadvantages of children to make own choices

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
As we all know everyone has the right to make their own choices, by
following
Linking Words
this
Linking Words
we'll become mentally strong and independent but
this
Linking Words
doesn'
t
Use synonyms
work every time. There will be some circumstances in which they definitely need their parent's advice to proceed
further
Linking Words
to make the correct decision because they have more experience of life
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
so that they won'
t
Use synonyms
regret it in future. On the one hand, if they are in the growing stage they can make small
decisions
Use synonyms
in their life.
Whereas
Linking Words
,
this
Linking Words
also
Linking Words
makes them strong because they'll get a chance to handle the situations from their point of view.
For instance
Linking Words
,they can choose a stream for their academics because they will have confidence that they can do it and will have better opportunities in future and they'll
also
Linking Words
get to know about their interests,likes and dislikes.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, if parents leave all the things to their
children
Use synonyms
and don'
t
Use synonyms
guide them in taking the right
decisions
Use synonyms
will cost their
children
Use synonyms
later.
Children
Use synonyms
almost always think emotionally rather than logically in
such
Linking Words
cases their guardians should help them in decision-making.
For example
Linking Words
, Keeping the thought of making
decisions
Use synonyms
independently
children
Use synonyms
nowadays, don'
t
Use synonyms
share anything with their parents. They are developing a mindset that they can make their own
decisions
Use synonyms
by themselves without anyone involved and regretting it later.
To sum up
Linking Words
, sometimes
children
Use synonyms
can understand the situation and put forth their own views and make choices for themselves but they should always consider the guardian's advice
also
Linking Words
when they need it.
Submitted by sameerkm on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomy
  • responsibility
  • self-confidence
  • decision-making skills
  • independence
  • problem-solving abilities
  • potential
  • consequences
  • overwhelming
  • experience
  • knowledge
  • wrong decisions
  • harmful choices
  • long-term
What to do next:
Look at other essays: