Discuss advantages and disadvantages of children to make own choices
As we all know everyone has the right to make their own choices, by
following
this
we'll become mentally strong and independent but this
doesn't
work every time. There will be some circumstances in which they definitely need their parent's advice to proceed further
to make the correct decision because they have more experience of life,
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regret it in future.
On the one hand, if they are in the growing stage they can make small decisions
in their life. Whereas
, this
also
makes them strong because they'll get a chance to handle the situations from their point of view. For instance
,they can choose a stream for their academics because they will have confidence that they can do it and will have better opportunities in future and they'll also
get to know about their interests,likes and dislikes.
On the other hand
, if parents leave all the things to their children
and don't
guide them in taking the right decisions
will cost their children
later. Children
almost always think emotionally rather than logically in such
cases their guardians should help them in decision-making. For example
, Keeping the thought of making decisions
independently children
nowadays, don't
share anything with their parents. They are developing a mindset that they can make their own decisions
by themselves without anyone involved and regretting it later.
To sum up
, sometimes children
can understand the situation and put forth their own views and make choices for themselves but they should always consider the guardian's advice also
when they need it.Submitted by sameerkm on
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