The main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s
The given pie chart illustrates the percentages of 4 sectors that reduced the productivity of farmland. The table presented the causes of soil degradation
influenced
three nations in the world in the year 1990.
Correct pronoun usage
that influenced
Overall
, it can be seen from the pie chart the biggest effect of land degradation, which
is overgrazing by cows and the lowest was from other sectors. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, from the table the highest total of countries that had been impacted from
soil deterioration was Europe.
Change preposition
by
According to
the chart, overgrazing accounted for more than a third of the world’s degraded soil, trailed by deforestation was about 30 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, over-cultivation and other sources (28% and 7%) respectively.
On the other hand
, from the table
the biggest total amount of nations caused by land degradation was Europe which count almost 23%. Add a comma
,table
Furthermore
, Oceania was the second most affected region with a total of 13%. Lastly
, compared with North America the whole sector was 5% and only 7% smaller than Oceania.Submitted by viraandayani5 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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