‘Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s lives and should receive more funding.’ To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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companies have increased the funding

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, and it can reduce the

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of funding on reporting local

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people

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may think the local

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is more related to local residents’ daily lives, I believe international

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crucial and necessary to be known daily. On the one hand,

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may think that local

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is more relevant to the residents’ lives.

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companies have the accountability to report essential daily events to the public,

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as the new policies

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governments on

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immigrations

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, subsidies,

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, and increased gas prices.

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, residents can have better awareness to prepare and face the upcoming policies.

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people

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can have better budget control

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of living paycheck to paycheck or becoming homeless when they receive the

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increased prices on gas, electricity, and living.

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, I believe that international

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important. To

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elaborate, because nowadays

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are living in a global village, every event

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around the world can have

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impact on our daily lives.

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, the war between Russia and Ukraine has been leading the inflation worldwide and

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relationships between countries.

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virus began in China, which caused

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pandemic, and it has changed everyone’s

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or even lost their

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I agree that local

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is essential,

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should be funded

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amount of money continuously, I believe that international

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crucial and need to be reported equally to the public

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