Your friend would like to visit you but unfortunately you are not free when they want to come. Write a letter to your friend. Apologise Explain why you are busy Suggest another time

Dear Anna, It's been so long since we saw each other but I haven't forgotten the wonderful time we spent together
year in Paris. I am glad to hear that you are coming to my place, but ,
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I will not be available in March. I am travelling to New York next Monday to meet an important client. As you know, I have been responsible for my company's US branches,
meeting is important to my company. Is it possible to change the date of travelling? I will be back on April 1st. let me know your convenient time. I will take one week's leave to ensure that I have enough time to spend with you. You don't have to worry about the accommodation, plenty of space is available in my home. I will bake to strawberry tart, your favourite, though I am a disaster in the kitchen. I eagerly waiting for your reply. Best wishes, Jennifer
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