Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: · Your reason for writing · What you would like to happen · A nice, respectful style

Dear Sam Martin
This
is to express my concern about the nonstop barking of your pet
dog
.
This
weekend I was in my flat and observed that your pet
dog
was barking continuously the whole day and night . I understand that you bring him to make you aware of strangers' movement in our building but the
dog
was continuously barking at each passerby every day.
Therefore
I would like to suggest you that please train him to restrain his barking . ,
otherwise
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instruct him to behave normally. I would like to suggest you train him under a
dog
trainer to behave normally . It will give relief to entire building residents who have complaints about your pet
dog
barking. I hope you have understood my concerns and will act appropriately for the benefit of society members. Looking forward to a quick response from your side. Yours sincerely Mark Whitney.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disrupted
  • challenging
  • appreciate
  • solutions
  • training
  • anti-bark collars
  • excessive barking
  • resources
  • well-being
  • distress
  • amicably
  • cooperation
  • concern
  • neighbourly relations
  • understanding
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