The diagram shows the manufacturing process of sugar from sugar cane
The diagram provided describes the
process
of sugar
production and formation from sugar
cane
. The process
given is man-made. The starting point is the harvesting of sugar
cane
after the end
of the growth stage which takes about 12 to 18 months and the ending point is usually the drying and cooling stage of sugar
. The end
product is sugar
.
Overall
, after analyzing the above stages, it can be seen that the formation process
of sugar
from the raw material sugar
cane
entails many steps such
as harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, centrifuging, and finally
drying and cooling. It is a repeated process
. The end
product is dried and cool sugar
crystals.
The starting point is harvesting the mature and grown sugar
cane
by farmers. It is interesting to note that the growth phase’s duration is around 18 months. After the end
of the first stages comes the crushing process
where farmers put the sugar
canes inside a machine where it grinds the canes into liquid juice.
This
leads to the final four stages of the process
which are purification, evaporation, centrifuge and drying and cooling. In the purifying step, the liquid juice of sugar
cane
is purified with a Limestone filter to extract the filtrate. Then
, the evaporator uses heat to transform the purified juice into syrup. In the final steps, sugar
crystals are separated by centrifuge, dried and cooled in a huge container.Submitted by reham.mk93 on
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