The diagram shows the manufacturing process of sugar from sugar cane
The diagram provided describes the
process
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production and formation from Use synonyms
sugar
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cane
. The Use synonyms
process
given is man-made. The starting point is the harvesting of Use synonyms
sugar
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cane
after the Use synonyms
end
of the growth stage which takes about 12 to 18 months and the ending point is usually the drying and cooling stage of Use synonyms
sugar
. The Use synonyms
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product is Use synonyms
sugar
.
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Overall
, after analyzing the above stages, it can be seen that the formation Linking Words
process
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from the raw material Use synonyms
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cane
entails many steps Use synonyms
such
as harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, centrifuging, and Linking Words
finally
drying and cooling. It is a repeated Linking Words
process
. The Use synonyms
end
product is dried and cool Use synonyms
sugar
crystals.
The starting point is harvesting the mature and grown Use synonyms
sugar
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cane
by farmers. It is interesting to note that the growth phase’s duration is around 18 months. After the Use synonyms
end
of the first stages comes the crushing Use synonyms
process
where farmers put the Use synonyms
sugar
canes inside a machine where it grinds the canes into liquid juice.
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This
leads to the final four stages of the Linking Words
process
which are purification, evaporation, centrifuge and drying and cooling. In the purifying step, the liquid juice of Use synonyms
sugar
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cane
is purified with a Limestone filter to extract the filtrate. Use synonyms
Then
, the evaporator uses heat to transform the purified juice into syrup. In the final steps, Linking Words
sugar
crystals are separated by centrifuge, dried and cooled in a huge container.Use synonyms
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