The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

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The line chart illustrates how many visitors came to a particular Caribbean

island

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from 2010 to 2017.

Overall

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, the figure for tourists who visited a Caribbean

island

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experienced an upward trend in the given period.

In addition

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, the number of travellers who chose to stay on the

island

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is higher than those who stayed on cruise ships. The number of visitors who stayed on the

island

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during their trip was 0.8

million

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, after which it witnessed a significant rise to 1.5

million

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in 2013.

This

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category remained unchanged in the next two years.

Although

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there was a slight drop to 1.3

million

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people in 2016, it gained again and ended the period at 1.5

million

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visits. The data on travellers who stayed on cruise ships started at 500,000 people, followed by a slight fluctuation and

then

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it increased to 2

million

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people in 2017. The number of visitors travelling to that particular Caribbean

island

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climbed steadily, from 1

million

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at the beginning of the given period to 3.5

million

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in 2017.

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J. Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?