The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The line chart illustrates how many visitors came to a particular Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the figure for tourists who visited a Caribbean
island
experienced an upward trend in the given period.
In addition
, the number of travellers who chose to stay on the
island
is higher than those who stayed on cruise ships. The number of visitors who stayed on the
island
during their trip was 0.8
million
, after which it witnessed a significant rise to 1.5
million
in 2013.
This
category remained unchanged in the next two years.
Although
there was a slight drop to 1.3
million
people in 2016, it gained again and ended the period at 1.5
million
visits. The data on travellers who stayed on cruise ships started at 500,000 people, followed by a slight fluctuation and
then
it increased to 2
million
people in 2017. The number of visitors travelling to that particular Caribbean
island
climbed steadily, from 1
million
at the beginning of the given period to 3.5
million
in 2017.
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