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In some countries, criminal trials in law courts are shown on television so that the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years,
people
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 can watch criminal
trials
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 regularly on television in some counties.
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this
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 approach has both advantages and disadvantages in my opinion the drawbacks outweigh the benefits . On the one hand proponents of the view that criminal
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 should be shown on TV
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because it clearly demonstrates transparency and openness in the adjudication process. The public can see the proceedings firsthand and form their own opinions about the case. Thanks to that,
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 can increase awareness about the law or legal system
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.
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, criminal
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 can create fear in the mind of the criminal as they see the punishment the perpetrator receives as the form that can deter
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 from committing crimes
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 criminal
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 are shown on TV there are many benefits , in my opinion, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. The criminal trial can have more negative effects when it is shown on TV. Having cameras in the courtroom can create a tense atmosphere and make it difficult for the patients to focus on the case
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, media coverage can create conflicting opinions, which can affect the fairness of the
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.
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, broadcasting
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 can
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 infringe on the privacy rights of parties involved, particularly the victims and witnesses. So they will be shunned and discussed, especially the family of the criminal. In conclusion,
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 criminal
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 can increase transparency and accountability, the negative effects of
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 approach outweigh the advantages. The privacy and fairness of the
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 must be protected and unaffected by the media or
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's opinions
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