You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter, say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jenny Jaffier. I am writing

this

letter to cancel my enrollment in the

course

of data management for which I have planned to learn

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next summer and made a booking

last

month. Please avail me to explain why I can't join it. I have completed my graduation and currently, I am doing

part-time

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a part-time

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Job with one private limited company which is situated at 10 minutes distance from your institute. To enhance my skill in

Data

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the Data

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management field because I am working to collect survey information with the research and development department. If I add

this

course

to my portfolio

then

I can be one step forward in my career.

However

, My office is shifted

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another area which is far from the college. The

course

which I opted is having timing of 5:00 to 7:00 in evening and my office timings are till 4:30 pm.

As a result

it is next to impossible for me to reach for class at 5:00 pm as travel time from the new location of my office is around 45 to 50 minuts.

Hence

, I am unable to attend

this

classes.

In addition

, I want to enhance my skills in

this

field from your college only.

Thus

, requesting you to cancel my registration for mentioned

course

Also

, could you please book it for the Data Science

course

starting from 5th April which is having timing of 6:00 to 7:30 in evening. Waiting for your possitive response and do help me to shift my registration from one

course

to another. Thanking you in advance Yours sincerely, Jenny Jaffier

Submitted by mayini711 on Tue Mar 21 2023

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

270 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Part-time course
Cancellation
Booking
Administrator
Financial situation
Work commitments
Health issues
Inconvenience
Transfer
Subject area
Schedule
Format
Cancellation policy
Refund process
Assistance
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You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter, say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course

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