Due to the development of the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is debatable whether the consumption of freshwater

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citizens should be allowed to drink

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freely or limited by the government. From my perspective, both arguments are valid to a certain extent, but I am still in

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of the latter. The following paragraphs would shed light on my viewpoint. Admittedly, advocates of the first standpoint have their rational grounds.

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individuals should have the

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to

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according to

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their preferences. To be specific, in a democratic society, it is important and necessary to respect individuals'

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and allow civilians to decide for themselves about their drink. If the free

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is strictly restricted,

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action could pose dissatisfaction and protest in the community.

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the ability to

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freshwater without limitations has positive effects on the commercial economy of a nation. To elaborate, headhunters are able to produce new commodities and services which relate to freshwaters,

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as food processing and beverage production. In fact, in Vietnam, thanks to the

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to

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freshwater, the Coca-Cola company could produce bottled

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, which is carried out at their bottling plants in Vietnam, thereby reducing their transportation costs and increasing their production efficiency. Despite the aforementioned merits, I still believe that the

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needs to be controlled by the government. The most pertinent point is that legal bodies should control the

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of

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to protect clean

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resources. Specifically,

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is an essential resource for human life and livelihood, and freshwater sources are increasingly scarce globally, thereby the

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of clean

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needs to be carried out sustainably and responsibly. In the long run,

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action could ensure a sustainable supply of freshwater resources for future generations. Another justification is that controlling the

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allows

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officials to resolve disputes between businesses.

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, when the legal bodies control the

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of freshwater, headhunters must comply with the rules and limit disputes between different organizations regarding sharing

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resources fairly and reasonably. In reality, in Vietnam, in 2016, the government timely controlled the discharge of wastewater from the Formosa factory, which helped to resolve the disagreements between the Formosa factory and local residents. In conclusion, it is indisputable that not only does

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individuals to

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fresh

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their preferences show respect for personal

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, but it

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responds to the consumption needs of various citizens.

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, the consumption of clean

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should

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be carried out in a sensible way to ensure sustainability and protect the environment,

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to limit disagreement in the bottled

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market.